Instead of:
Try something like this:
Less formal, more active and friendly, and more concise.
Type: Posts; User: Adak
Instead of:
Try something like this:
Less formal, more active and friendly, and more concise.
Good idea to edit it down - make it clear, concise and complete.
1) use an active and current voice. Avoid expressions like "will probably", etc.
2) don''t hyperlink to other ways to do this....