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    code review

    Hi,
    I did an c program exercise where I enter a date in format DD MM YYYY (eg. 31 12 2003) to output 31st December 2003. Restrictions at this stage in the book I am reading are: no strings, loops or functions.

    After accepting the input, I check the date format is correct and check for leap days. If that is ok, I then use 2 switches to append "st, nd, rd, th" to the day and substitute the month name for the month number and finally print out the year. Here is my code. I feel that it is long winded and could be optimized. Care to criticize my code? Maybe the switch could be improved, ie is possible to have 1st 21st and 31st all on 1 line?

    Code:
    int main(void)
    {
      int day = 0;                    /* capture user input day, month, year */
      int month = 0;
      int year = 0;
      bool isLeapYear = 0;                             /* check for leap day */
      bool validDate = 1;                      /* flag for processing output */
     
      /* user input */
      printf("\nEnter a date in the format DD MM YYYY. eg 31 12 2003\n> ");
      scanf("%d %d %d", &day, &month, &year);
       
      /* validate entry */
      if ( ((day<1)||(day>31)) || ((month<1)||(month>12)) || (year<1))
      {
        printf("Sorry invalid date entry.\n");
        validDate = 0;
      }
      /* check day entered against the 5 months do not exceed 30 days */
      else if ( (((month==4)||(month==6)||(month==9)||(month==11)) && (day>30))
                || (month==2)&&(day>29))
      {
        printf("\nInvalid day %d for month %d.\n", day, month);
        validDate = 0;
      }
      else if ((month==2)&&(day==29)) /* check if leap year */
      {
        isLeapYear = ( ((year%4==0)&&(year%100 != 0)) || (year%400 == 0));
        if (!isLeapYear)
        {
          printf("\nInvalid day %d for non leap year %d.\n", day, year);
          validDate = 0;
        }
      }
      
      if(validDate)   /* date entry is correct proceed with internal processing */
      {
        printf("Date in long format is: %d",day);  
        switch(day)       /* print date postfix */
        {
          case 1:
            printf("st");
            break;
          case 2:
            printf("nd");
            break;
          case 3:
            printf("rd");
            break;
          case 21:
            printf("st");
            break;
          case 22:
            printf("nd");
            break;
          case 23:
            printf("rd");
            break;
          case 31:
            printf("st");
            break;
           
          default:
    	printf("th");
            break;
        }
     
        switch(month)     /* print month */
        {
          case 1:
            printf(" January");
            break;
          case 2:
            printf(" February");
            break;
          case 3:
            printf(" March");
            break;
          case 4:
            printf(" April");
            break;
          case 5:
            printf(" May");
            break;
          case 6:
            printf(" June");
            break;
          case 7:
            printf(" July");
            break;
          case 8:
            printf(" August");
            break;
          case 9:
            printf(" September");
            break;
          case 10:
            printf(" October");
            break;
          case 11:
            printf(" November");
            break;
          case 12:
            printf(" December");
            break;
          
          default:
    	printf("<undefined month>");
            break;
        }
        printf(" %d.\n\n", year);  /* print year */
      }
      return 0;
    }
    /*
    Output:
    Enter a date in the format DD MM YYYY. eg 31 12 2003
    > 1 12 2009
    Date in long format is: 1st December 2009.
    */

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    Yes, you can say
    Code:
      case 1: case 21: case 31:
        printf("st");
        break;
    You're just taking advantage of switch's fallthrough.

    Edit: You could also replace switch(month) by creating a 12 or 13-element array of strings (you need 13 if you want indexing to start at 1). You could initialize it like
    Code:
      char *months[] = {"January", "February", /* blah blah */, "December"};
    Last edited by robatino; 04-03-2007 at 05:28 PM.

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    Thanks robatino. I was thinking I could do that but I was trying case 1 : 21 : 31.

    I am using <stdbool.h> but the compiler doesn't like me assigning validDate = TRUE; - even though validDate is type bool. It works though if I assign validDate=1; (but I may as well use int then).

    Other ideas was to enum for the months but I need to refer to the vars as number in the end.
    Last edited by hamsteroid; 04-03-2007 at 05:30 PM. Reason: bool

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    On my box, <stdbool.h> has lower-case, not upper-case, true and false defined as 1 and 0.

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    robatino, good ideas, I will not be using arrays for two more chapters. But will certainly keep it in mind. In the meantime I'll take advantage of the switch's fall through and make the switch look smaller and more readable. eg. case 1: case 21: case 31:

    Thanks again.

    actually, strange about <stdbool.h> I'll try ValidDate = true; Maybe it was capital case it didn't like. I'm using gcc under mandriva 2006.1

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    I know that in C++, a bool type has values (lower-case) true and false, so it's reasonable to assume that <stdbool.h> does the same (I think <stdbool.h> is from C99 which is after C++98).

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    I know that in C++, a bool type has values (lower-case) true and false, so it's reasonable to assume that <stdbool.h> does the same (I think <stdbool.h> is from C99 which is after C++98).
    That is correct. C99 has a variable type called _Bool. In <stdbool.h> bool is defined as _Bool, and true and false are defined as well.

    In Windows programming one uses BOOL and TRUE and FALSE, and TRUE and FALSE are often defined in older C programs.
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