Thread: please help me correct this program

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    Unhappy please help me correct this program

    Code:
    #include <servo.h>
     
    const int servo1 = 3;       // first servo
    const int servo2 = 10;       // second servo
    const int joyH = 4;        // Joystick Horizontal Axis
    const int joyV = 5;        // Joystick vertical Axis
     
    int servoVal;           // variable to read the value from the analog pin
     
    Servo myservo1;  // create servo object to control a servo
    Servo myservo2;  // create servo object to control a servo
     
     
     
    void setup() {
     
      // Servo
      myservo1.attach(servo1);  // attaches the servo
      myservo2.attach(servo2);  // attaches the servo
     
      // Inizialize Serial
      Serial.begin(9600);
    }
     
     
    void loop(){
     
        // Display Joystick values using the serial monitor
        outputJoystick();
     
        // Read the horizontal joystick value  (value between 0 and 1023)
        servoVal = analogRead(joyH);
        servoVal = map(servoVal, 0, 1023, 0, 180);     // scale it to use it with the servo (result  between 0 and 180)
     
        myservo2.write(servoVal);                               // sets the servo position according to the scaled value
     
        // Read the horizontal joystick value  (value between 0 and 1023)
        servoVal = analogRead(joyV);
        servoVal = map(servoVal, 0, 1023, 70, 180);     // scale it to use it with the servo (result between 70 and 180)
     
        myservo1.write(servoVal);                              // sets the servo position according to the scaled value
     
        delay(15);                                             // waits for the servo to get there
     
    }
     
     
    /**
    * Display joystick values
    */
    void outputJoystick(){
     
        Serial.print(analogRead(joyH));
        Serial.print ("---");
        Serial.print(analogRead(joyV));
        Serial.println ("----------------");
    }

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    Correct how?

    You don't say what is "wrong".
    You don't say what would be considered "right".

    You don't specify a main() to call it.
    You don't specify what kind of device you're talking to - other than it seems to imply a servo and a joystick.

    You don't document (or provide links to) what analogRead() and map() do.
    If you dance barefoot on the broken glass of undefined behaviour, you've got to expect the occasional cut.
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    sorry

    sorry this program is for arduino uno its meant to control 2 servos via a thumbstick
    Code:
    #include <servo.h>  
    const int servo1 = 3;       // first servo
    const int servo2 = 10;       // second servo
    const int joyH = 4;        // Joystick Horizontal Axis
    const int joyV = 5;        // Joystick vertical Axis
      
    int servoVal;           // variable to read the value from the analog pin
    (its says servo does not name a type)  
    Servo myservo1;  // create servo object to control a servo
    Servo myservo2;  // create servo object to control a servo
      
      
      
    void setup() {
      
      // Servo
      myservo1.attach(servo1);  // attaches the servo
      myservo2.attach(servo2);  // attaches the servo
      
      // Inizialize Serial
      Serial.begin(9600);
    }
      
      
    void loop(){
      
        // Display Joystick values using the serial monitor
        outputJoystick();
      
        // Read the horizontal joystick value  (value between 0 and 1023)
        servoVal = analogRead(joyH);
        servoVal = map(servoVal, 0, 1023, 0, 180);     // scale it to use it with the servo (result  between 0 and 180)
      
        myservo2.write(servoVal);                               // sets the servo position according to the scaled value
      
        // Read the horizontal joystick value  (value between 0 and 1023)
        servoVal = analogRead(joyV);
        servoVal = map(servoVal, 0, 1023, 70, 180);     // scale it to use it with the servo (result between 70 and 180)
      
        myservo1.write(servoVal);                              // sets the servo position according to the scaled value
      
        delay(15);                                             // waits for the servo to get there
      
    }
      
      
    /**
    * Display joystick values
    */
    void outputJoystick(){
      
        Serial.print(analogRead(joyH));
        Serial.print ("---");
        Serial.print(analogRead(joyV));
        Serial.println ("----------------");
    }

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    Let me repeat what Salem said:

    Correct how?

    You don't say what is "wrong".
    You don't say what would be considered "right".

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    Arduino - Sweep

    TBH, you would probably be better off asking on Index - Arduino Forum, where they're likely to know if there is any particular trick involved.
    All we can do is read the manual (just like you), and maybe make a slightly better guess (but still a guess) as to what is wrong.
    If you dance barefoot on the broken glass of undefined behaviour, you've got to expect the occasional cut.
    If at first you don't succeed, try writing your phone number on the exam paper.

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    i'll try that any ways thanks a lot!

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