I'm working on a license for my software, and I was wondering if I left anything out that should be there, or if anything is contradictory. It is an open-source license.

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Bludstayne Open Works License (BOWL)
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All limitations and priviledges listed herein pertain to the entity and all associated 
works for which the license is in effect for. For software, this includes all original source
code, headers, libraries, executable files, and media needed to compile and run the program.

*   You may redistrubute, modify, release, run, and otherwise manipulate the work in any
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    of the work and that the release you have made is an unofficial release.
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    be released. If it is, the original author that had turned it into the virus/trojan/worm
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    party, the original author who turned it into one is.
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*   No modifications may be made to this file. It must match up to the file at
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    be made.
*   If any other version of this license is made, it is a seperate license.
*   Every source and header file for software must state that it is under the Bludstayne
    Open Works License, and that license.txt (this file) is available.
    
This license is copyrighted (C) 2003 Joshua William Taylor I