"you other brothers can't deny...."
HEY! quit that!
"you other brothers can't deny...."
HEY! quit that!
You have impressive skill in writing, and it shows in this narrative. The theme, unfortunately, needs work. By the end of the first paragraph or two, I could tell exactly where this story was headed. It's okay to vent your frustrations, but I think such a caustic piece of satire--aimed at your teacher no less--is a less than cordial way to participate in class. You just have to bear out the annoying people.
Now please excuse me while I take a dose of my own medicine....
I agree it was a little harsh, but i can't write unless i have a interest in it, so i had to do something i wanted to do. I've written stories before that teachers have used as a piece of curricular example for more then a few aspects of literature, but only when i was into it.
The writting is nice but....
Do you hate your new teacher that much, I mean your old teacher is great, but that doesn't mean the new one isn't, I think you should give her a chance...
none...
Yes i do, and as i have stated several times in this thread, WE DID give her a chance, several chances.
Well, if she is really bad, I think she deserves it...Originally posted by Ride -or- Die
Yes i do, and as i have stated several times in this thread, WE DID give her a chance, several chances.
Give he that writting...
I really hate bad teachers...
none...
she got it monday, heres to hoping its graded today, i wasn't there yesterday. GTG actually, later on.
