It sounds a little bit akward, if you know what I mean. I think putting a "having" somewhere might make it ring better - dying but having not yet fallen on the lush grass below. And maybe a ',' after...
Type: Posts; User: twomers
It sounds a little bit akward, if you know what I mean. I think putting a "having" somewhere might make it ring better - dying but having not yet fallen on the lush grass below. And maybe a ',' after...