Poem: Suicide Note

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    Poem: Suicide Note

    In my mind, I hide such a divine disturbance
    God I need help and its urgent, the earth has been infected with ignorance
    My primary enemy, which is society, is holding a conspiratorial grudge against me
    My respect for my mortality has gone adrift to the sea of the mysterious
    I'm about to jump this bridge and I'm a tad bit more serious
    I have the rope tighten around my neck, I refuse to loosen because I don't want to breathe
    Females and I never connect, ending my life early is what I want to achieve
    It has been shown that my suffering and pain have grown to the point where everyone is at sudden disbelief
    No one in the world will express their anguish for my grief
    In my mind my death will be painless, let's see
    I'm about to jump off this bridge, here I go, one...two.....three..
    But possibly, if I survive
    My mother and everyone alive, will try to re-establish their love for me
    It is hard for a 17 year absent entity to get established
    Rock harder than trying to have sex without a mattress
    I'm always thinking about breast and sex, and no I'm not a $$$got
    I need a place to put my erection and stretch, suicide is sex and I'm an addict
    The only difference, between suicide and sex is the mode of activity it requires
    But in contrast, they're both sins but they fulfill my devious desires
    In reality, hard to explain because its complex, I really don't want to die
    My absence for sex, has increased my need for suicide
    My social isolation, which I'm hating, has me partaking homocide
    It's a piece of cake, as I swim this lake, I'll mix it with water and swollow my hollow pride
    Some followed and died
    Establishing a leadership, I've tried
    But who am I? I look deep inside as I try to avoid the void that leads to suicide
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    that's nice





    get laid and get over it
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    Oh woe! Woe is me!
    I've not been laid since I was wee
    But suicide can set me free
    So here's some awful poetry.
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    Re: Poem: Suicide Note

    Originally posted by KingZoolerius66
    ...I'm about to jump this bridge and I'm a tad bit more serious
    I have the rope tighten around my neck, I refuse to loosen because I don't want to breathe...
    I was never good with poetry ... Does this mean that the subject ties a rope around his neck and jump of the bridge ?

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    your powers of deduction astound me


    what he wrote is hardly poetry, just simple couplets, if it was in iambic pentameter i'd be more impressed.
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    Originally posted by Ken Fitlike
    Now THAT is high quality literature. I'll never understand how you do that, Fitlike.

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    I feel that in both poems sex is causing too much internal conflict. I know from growth that life has much to offer and sex is a small part. Sex is not love! The frustration that comes from abstinace is difficult but we should try in understand it is only frustration. We should persue love over sex specificaly. When we express our feelings with love in mind, caring becomes simple. Frustration over sex is narcissitic, frustration about love is feeling for others and that is outward expression which will make one feel better knowing you are caring for others not just oneself.

    Suicide is also narcisstic because you choose to disregard the feeling of others to achieve inner selfish resolve, but if you begin to act upon and care about others you will also find satisfaction in oneself and hence not feel suicidal.

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    Originally posted by Govtcheez
    Now THAT is high quality literature.
    Ho Ho Ho! ( <---seasonally adjusted laughter)
    Originally posted by curlious
    both poems
    I give up.
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    This is the same guy who said he was going to kill himself before, only with a new name.

    If you prance about telling everyone you're going to kill yourself, you better go through with it, otherwise you just look like a tard.

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    seriesX or whatever?

    loser


    >>i give up

    it's ok Ken, i got it
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    Originally posted by BMJ
    This is the same guy who said he was going to kill himself before, only with a new name.

    If you prance about telling everyone you're going to kill yourself, you better go through with it, otherwise you just look like a tard.
    Which guy?

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    My primary enemy, which is society, is holding a conspiratorial grudge against me
    A poem is supposed to flow freely. Repeat the line in your head, and see why it doesn't (hint: "which is society")

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    Originally posted by BMJ
    This is the same guy who said he was going to kill himself before, only with a new name.

    If you prance about telling everyone you're going to kill yourself, you better go through with it, otherwise you just look like a tard.
    You mean Series X4 1.0?
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    Why did you paste that poem here

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    I'm not gonna kill myself. I just want you guys to read and rate my poem.
    Name: Eric Lesnar
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