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| the road i follow dearest to me blinds and troubles endlessly a companion needed for lonelyness stays enchant the fleeting momentary rays a connection lost with no hope at all a download corrupted brimming with flaws the moments flying searing the screen a rest to be taken sit back to lean the floor you embrace with arms open wide your companion you found albeit its ground joy abounding a plug replaced truly most astounding corruption erased. -a poemish type thing by a newbie(at poetry, i'm pro at evry thing else, like spellng and stuff) |
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| Sometimes my old man can be a real dick, and here's the bull**** that results from it: Some don't know Very few do intention leaks reasons skew no one can smell no one can hear that purpose reeks with skid-marked smear You're no different You can't see You don't know My meaning to be It's short and it sucks, but it's a lot better than kicking a hole in the wall. |
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| horatio's ratio Horatio's ratio; the sum of all means. he had no heart and he had no spleen. He had a lung and maybe a liver he had a hand but it always would shiver. he collected organs keyboards, rather the notes were all the shampoo he could lather. His hair was gray his voice was soft he lived above me in the loft. And when he came down for dinner and tea he would take out a trinket and give it to me. Everynight a different trinket i would recieve and he lost more wisdom he couldn't retrieve. and so one night he came down blind his eyes were on a chain and trailing behind. He gave them to me as he laid down to die and all they would do is cry and cry. A year went by and the eyes were haunting i wanted to return them but the task was too daunting. One day i gathered the might and the power to put the curtains back onto the shower. So i went to his grave and dug it up real quick i had in hands a shovel and by my side: a stick. As i stood there staring at the man i couldn't bring myself to finish my plan. i searched his body and found a note it was signed "horatio" and on it was wrote: "to my friend, to you i have endowed the one thing that so long had my heart cowed. "thank you for listening and taking my toys because, you know, they are meant for boys." and with that the note concluded and so i had found what my mind had eluded. |
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| Okay. These are all really long. I rarely write past 6 or seven lines. A knowing old man Screaming 'What?' in my face Thousand years before him They closed the bloody mines Now thousands new machines Sing in my ears I also rarely title anything I write. Cant really see the point. Got a letter Waiting for time to slip by It said 'Get up' I did not Now its rains on red tin roof Slides down dusted glass Not all of them make a lot of sense immediatly. Laugh and hit my head Drowning lights Sit and smile at me More skin revealed Bottled weights Bring the curtain down |
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| John Hall On an Houre-glasse MY Life is measur'd by this glasse, this glasse By all those little Sands that thorough passe. See how they presse, see how they strive, which shall With greatest speed and greatest quicknesse fall. See how they raise a little Mount, and then With their owne weight doe levell it agen. But when th' have all got thorough, they give o're Their nimble sliding downe, and move no more. Just such is man whose houres still forward run, Being almost finisht ere they are begun; So perfect nothings, such light blasts are we, That ere w'are ought at all, we cease to be. Do what we will, our hasty minutes fly, And while we sleep, what do we else but die? How transient are our Joyes, how short their day! They creepe on towards us, but flie away. How stinging are our sorrowes! where they gaine But the least footing, there they will remaine. How groundlesse are our hopes, how they deceive Our childish thoughts, and onely sorrow leave! How reall are our feares! they blast us still, Still rend us, still with gnawing passions fill; How senselesse are our wishes, yet how great! With what toile we pursue them, with what sweat! Yet most times for our hurts, so small we see, Like Children crying for some Mercurie. This gapes for Marriage, yet his fickle head Knows not what cares waite on a Marriage bed. This vowes Virginity, yet knowes not what Lonenesse, griefe, discontent, attends that state. Desires of wealth anothers wishes hold, And yet how many have been choak't with Gold? This onely hunts for honour, yet who shall Ascend the higher, shall more wretched fall. This thirsts for knowledge, yet how is it bought With many a sleeplesse night and racking thought? This needs will travell, yet how dangers lay Most secret Ambuscado's in the way? These triumph in their Beauty, though it shall Like a pluck't Rose or fading Lillie fall. Another boasts strong armes, 'las Giants have By silly Dwarfes been drag'd unto their grave. These ruffle in rich silke, though ne're so gay, A well plum'd Peacock is more gay then they. Poore man, what art! A Tennis ball of Errour, A Ship of Glasse toss'd in a Sea of terrour, Issuing in blood and sorrow from the wombe, Crauling in teares and mourning to the tombe, How slippery are thy pathes, how sure thy fall, How art thou Nothing when th' art most of all! |
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| ""Not all of them make a lot of sense immediatly. "" you can miss out the word immediately in that sentance!! you'd have to explain em to me ! mebe i'm thick.
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| >>you'd have to explain em to me Heh. Not sure I'd want to. Mostly they're about a moment or place that caught my attention. Sometimes I'd rather noone knew what they were about. I'll throw a few more out there. Sunken chest cavity Maggots eat the body slouched against cold wall Wonder if hes seeing light Now hes at the end of his tunnel Doubting it Theres no light in mine This is what happens When your mind reaches the end of the track And falls off I'd better explain the next one or you'll all think I'm whako. I was listening to the Deftones when it struck me: I'm enjoying listening to somebody else sing about their pain. On Display Oh oh Scream Your vocal chords are bleeding I like your pain It amuses me Oh oh You scream I'm smiling This ones intent should be a little more obvious. (?) Childs toy Spins fast once released We spun fast once too Time and friction take their toll The top falters Dings the floor We all watch in horror Waiting Wanting thet child Spin us again BTW Aran, I enjoyed that 'horatio's ratio'. Very nice. |
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| even i can get those. you shouldn't explain poetry anyway, its like explaining jokes.....rather defeats the point.
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| Sun to none. Floating dreams the ransom of my mind. thoughts more sublime trouble my mind. Deft speakers feed you my life now, with a spoon longer than the plank i stand on. All alone i take one last drink to the things i know and to the things i think, or rather i think i know.... does the mind not grow? too bad mine just got swollen; when the ice applied gone was my wit my intelligence clever? i am no longer. Life? i am no longer. i make hello into goodbye day to night sun to rain... sun to rain? no, rain is too temporary. sun to none. Last edited by Aran; 06-03-2002 at 06:18 PM. |
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| hey, thats a lot better than Aran's !! Baby Stevey's rather hyper, tho' he's weighed down by his diaper, that diaper really honks, and it has done for some yonks, should really go and empty it, and hence be bereft of s.hit !!
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| One from me Here's one I wrote. Its a little long, but its easy to follow and apparently funny. :P Oh and if u like it i've got heaaaps more Lambs of War There were two lambs in a paddock, Munching on the grass, When suddenly a bomber, Made a swooping pass. The lambs were frozen solid, Not knowing what to do, For these two little lambs, Did not know metal flew. The bomber doubled back, Heading where it had come from, Leaving two bewildered lambs, Gazing at a falling bomb. Several seconds passed, Then it hit the ground, With a blinding flash of light, And a massive rumbling sound. The lambs were blasted backwards, Landing in the grass, Staring up into the sky, Getting cut by falling glass. Once they had recovered, They struggled to their feet, Shook off bits of rubble, And began to bleat. Their mother waddled over, Soaked in her own blood, Gave each of them a tender lick, Then fell, dead, in the mud. The lambs were devastated, Filled with bitter hate, They gathered up their strength, And jumped over the gate. They ran as fast as possible, Heading for the house, Then crept passed the farmers dog, As quiet as a mouse. They found what they were looking for, And headed back outside, Crouched behind the pick-up truck, They'd fight until they died. There was a distant rumble, The plane was coming near, The little lambs were trembling, Shaking, full of fear. The plane shot overhead, The lambs fired the gun, The plane was blown to pieces, The little lambs had won. -out- PsychoBrat
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| well i like it. lambs to the slaughter eh? the lambs that turned?
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| uhm... here..its about cprogramming.com hehe with the visual workspace for c programming was the job for me; it left me full and never doubting always right for lack of pouting; my code flowed free as a river of rain debuging, simple, never full of shame; until the day on which i died not physically, but in my mind; my code was a wreak, all jumbled and confused my memory was sad, it felt abused; so help did i seek, a while in looking cprogramming.com was now my beautiful rookie; day in an out it waits for me always on the job, no resting spree; advice it lends when im in need articles it hides when im wont to read; a friendly shoulder to me it lends cprogramming.com is my only friend. -dedicated to all the hard working posters(people who post) at cprogramming.com -a poemish type thing by a newbie(at poetry, i'm pro at evry thing else, like spellng and stuff) |
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